LawTalkers - Fashion Board--Penske . . . forever!

Originally posted by Flinty_McFlint
I read str8's South Park script (PM him for a copy), and he requested that I (and I guess others) make their critiques on the board, so that's what I'm doing.

Overall, very funny and very true to the characters/feeling of the show. I could see/hear the characters speaking their lines for the most part. I might tone the language down in parts and just make up swear words, as they are going to be bleeped as they are now. I think a couple of typos, no biggie. My main advice would be the ending--it isn't strong enough of a payoff at the end, as it's been solid up to that point. I'll wait for other peoples' opinions and can offer more if you want.

I will refrain on commenting on your looks as I know you are supersensitive.

I think you're unfairly harsh. I'll bet most people here would LOVE the ending. I'm going to solicit the opinion of at least two other posters here. Plus, you didn't mention anything about how I described Cartman's hair or legs.

P.S. I was being facetious, chimp.

Hank Chinaski

08-22-2006 09:30 PM

Actual Fashion-Related Question

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Originally posted by Adder
Either:

1. She is descending into Paigow-like insanity, or

2. She actually is Paigow. Of course Thurgreed would know that (I think), so it must be number 1. Which is kind of amusing in a scary as hell way.

Mean alternative post: and your ass has no grounds to insult her. a randomly selected Paigow post tops your collected work.

Friendly alternative post: Maybe, Paigow is a JAP.

dtb	08-22-2006 09:30 PM

First they'll take your porn

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Originally posted by sebastian_dangerfield
I can't kiss a chick I don't respect. Its a wierd thing with me. I could fuck her, but kissing's more personal.

Does a hello, on-the-cheek kiss count? Because if so, all I can conclude is, "YOU LIKE ME!!!!" Or you respect me?

Either way - your answer is VERY IMPORTANT. Please respond to me by PM.

Hank Chinaski

08-22-2006 09:37 PM

Because you all have such good taste.

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Originally posted by str8outavannuys
I'm going to break my vow of non-responsiveness by point out something obvious (to me). It seems as if you're bragging about being 38E, or at least, fighting TM to have your claim of 38E-ness be generally accepted. 38E is not an attractive bra size. 38E does not make me want to jump out of my chair and say "damn, there's someone I've got to see topless." In fact, it's downright busted. Especially when you add in the other facts that have come to light -- size 12, short, etc. etc.

I now reimpose my vow of non-responsiveness re busto.

I said this 4 days ago. Fuck. i could have been in show biz:(

dtb	08-22-2006 09:39 PM

GRR

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Originally posted by Sidd Finch

A brilliant, if only marginally funny, display of irony.

You keep a-usin' that word...

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Originally posted by Sidd Finch

That's because RT holds a special place in her heart for me, I know, because I think I was the first GA she met IRL.

TM was the first GA I met IRL. About 10 minutes before I met about 12 others. Ahhh. Good times.

Sidd Finch

08-22-2006 09:43 PM

GRR

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Originally posted by dtb
You keep a-usin' that word...

Perhaps I use it in an intentionally ironic manner, such that the real meaning and the literal meaning of my statements are at odds with each other. Or is that incontheivable to you?

In any event, you should just be happy that you can't hear me breaking out in song each time. It's like ray-hay-hayyyn.....

Hank Chinaski

08-22-2006 09:47 PM

First they'll take your porn

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Originally posted by SlaveNoMore
Still not as bad as my buddy who was away on business, whose wife got a call in the middle of the night from Citibank trying to confirm a number of late night charges.

When he flew home, the first question she asked him was "What is the Mitchell Brothers theater"????

Damn. somehow I would have thought Penske would have had credit cards under false names......

dtb	08-22-2006 09:47 PM

Because you all have such good taste.

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Originally posted by Penske_Account
Unless you run so much you can eat like a freak!

This is my goal.

Fewer than 10 weeks until marathon day.

CRAP!

Hank Chinaski

08-22-2006 09:49 PM

Actual Fashion-Related Question

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Originally posted by patentparanyc
Hickey has nice ties. Zegna has hot salesmen. [no, not hitting on me] and nice ties...Paul Stuart has both.

your hot, or thurgreed's?

Hank Chinaski

08-22-2006 09:54 PM

We pause from the ppnyc show for this brief public service announcement

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Originally posted by sebastian_dangerfield
That's laudable, but its dudes like you who don't beat the piss out of Napoleons, thus destroying those Napoleons' self-confidence and self-image, and consequently spiralling them into a deathdive of drug abuse and suicide, that allows those twits to make life so annoying for the rest of us.

If you're as big as fucking Leinart, you gotta use that shit, man. You look like Michael Clark Duncan to the average 5'6 loudmouth douche. God put you here for a reason and you're fucking it all up...

dimfuck, he meant those measurements in metric

pony_trekker

08-22-2006 09:58 PM

And now for something completely different.

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Originally posted by ThurgreedMarshall
Ankle injuries suck. And they take much longer as you get older to heal. (Although, the one weird thing about them is that they heal faster after the first bad sprain, but that in neither here nor there.)

It's weird that it didn't swell, but that may be the timely application of ice and elevation. You may have stretched a ligament or something, which can take ages to heal. Go to the doctor and have him look at it. You may have just never let it heal properly and you're probably re-injuring it every day. Pain over a long period of time = There is something wrong.

TM

true. With my 1st sprained ankle it fucking killed (though I had gotten into a fight with three guys on the subway and was adrenalined out so I didn't feel it until later) and swelled like a fucking baloon.

Hank Chinaski

08-22-2006 10:01 PM

Because you all have such good taste.

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Originally posted by ltl/fb
Fat, but not necessarily butt. I think I am about the same height as you and wear a slightly smaller clothing size.

You aren't like obese or anything, you are just overweight. And you are exercising, so you are being relatively healthy.

does she mostly eat bagels or fritters?

Hank Chinaski

08-22-2006 10:08 PM

Because you all have such good taste.

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Originally posted by Adder
We have had this discussion here before, but for what it is worth, running at a faster pace only makes a difference if you run for the same amount of time (and thereby cover more ground).

so you feel fartlek or intervels are really of no help to the 10K runner?

Hank Chinaski

08-22-2006 10:19 PM

Because you all have such good taste.

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Originally posted by str8outavannuys
I was in the middle of blowing a bubble when I read this -- as a result, my gum flew three feet across my desk. Lucky for me, it landed on by Bluebook (15th ed). I put it back in my mouth -- five second rule and all that.

ummm, penske meant that joke, clearly. ncs whiffed- and you spit up at a whiff? NWTF is that called?

sebastian_dangerfield

08-22-2006 10:34 PM

First they'll take your porn

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Originally posted by dtb
Not that much, maybe. What does an average wife think about her husband visiting prostitutes?

They're family. What am I supposed to do? Shut them out for the holidays?

Uh, mine knows I'm in the presence of them at bachelor parties. She's also been in a "special" Asian massage parlor looking for a buddy of mine who we thought might have gone there blacked out drunk one night. She's got no issue with me being near them, just so long as I'm not doing anything with them.

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