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Doctors vs. lawyers; cats vs. dogs.
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Originally posted by Tyrone Slothrop
Some of us who write for a living aspire to more than not sounding utterly stupid. But thank you for your suggestions.
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this would read better with a comma or some other break after "more". Not to be critical, but first read I took "more than not" to be a phrasing of refering to the subject of the prior post. try reading it with my suggestion.
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I will not suffer a fool- but I do seem to read a lot of their posts
Last edited by Hank Chinaski; 06-11-2004 at 12:00 PM..
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