08-04-2004, 01:46 AM
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Hello, Dum-Dum.
Join Date: Mar 2003
Posts: 10,117
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Poetry lesson
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Originally posted by Hank Chinaski
This part "a worthless piece of cat poop like John-Henry Williams, Ted's son, who freeze dried his dad’s head. Go Sox!" is what Atticus was saying is the way a Haiku should end. a seeming non-sequitor that isn't. Better if tied to nature, but still. Not bob. take note. People ignore that all the time and criticze metre.
Posters here count words
ignore real rules, for nonsense
count trees in junk yard
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I could just kiss you
if I were a Detroit gay.
Pansies in slag heaps.
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