Fashion Board--Penske . . . forever!

[Penske_Account]

Originally posted by ltl/fb
They changed the name roughly a million years ago. Christ. She specified it was old.

Burger, it is not an Accord. There were already Accords before anyone dreamed up the Vigor.

I'd drive a Viggen, although they don't make those anymore either.

[patentparanyc]

Originally posted by Penske_Account
I'd drive a Viggen, although they don't make those anymore either.

is that like a farvegnuegen?

[ltl/fb]

Originally posted by Penske_Account
I'd drive a Viggen, although they don't make those anymore either.

Friggin' Viggens. Saab?

[sebastian_dangerfield]

Originally posted by Sparklehorse
No doubt, I just never focused on the brand name, just the writing on the trunk. I know it's unAmerican but I really couldn't give a shit about cars beyond their utility and some comfort.

You're still dumb.

[Sparklehorse]

Originally posted by sebastian_dangerfield
You're still dumb.

Oh you crush me.

[patentparanyc]

Originally posted by ltl/fb
They changed the name roughly a million years ago. Christ. She specified it was old.

Burger, it is not an Accord. There were already Accords before anyone dreamed up the Vigor.

wahhhh are you in a bad mood?

[nononono]

Originally posted by patentparanyc
The way she phrased it. weird man. that and I'm still smarting from her consistent Victoriana like postings of Victorian Period Art. That is also weird and annoying.

You have suggestions for a re-write, maybe add in some gratuitous commas or leave some out just for fun?

I like the art. Reminds me of things I used to know.

[patentparanyc]

Originally posted by nononono
You have suggestions for a re-write, maybe add in some gratuitous commas or leave some out just for fun?

I like the art. Reminds me of things I used to know.

I would put brackets all over the place to annoy the crap out of RP and would have red markered and rewrote the whole thing, but that is just me. No actual suggestions and too tired to revise.

[Hank Chinaski]

Originally posted by Mmmm, Burger (C.J.)
The thing is, that grandmother saw his three brothers and sisters peering in through the dining-room window, with a "why not me, too" look on their faces. Except their faces were dirty, and pockmarked, and the sisters and brothers kept running around in odd directions. So rather than invite them in, she told pluto to run along with the other rapscallions.

ummmm, no. Pluto was a full-fledged planet, it wasn't probationary. He's like a partner who was voted full-share when maybe the firm didn't really think it through. Now the firm realizes he doesn't have enough pull to stay a partner, and so he's of counsel.

[Penske_Account]

Originally posted by ltl/fb
Friggin' Viggens. Saab?

yes. a limited edition 9-3 from a few years back. I was more practical then.

[bold_n_brazen]

Originally posted by nononono
You have suggestions for a re-write, maybe add in some gratuitous commas or leave some out just for fun?

I like the art. Reminds me of things I used to know.

And the women come and go, talking of Michelangelo.

[Penske_Account]

Originally posted by nononono
You have suggestions for a re-write, maybe add in some gratuitous commas or leave some out just for fun?

I like the art. Reminds me of things I used to know.

It needed ellipses to punch it up a bit....

[patentparanyc]

Originally posted by Penske_Account
yes. a limited edition 9-3 from a few years back. I was more practical then.

You've upgraded, dude.

[nononono]

Originally posted by patentparanyc
I would put brackets all over the place to annoy the crap out of RP and would have red markered and rewrote the whole thing, but that is just me. No actual suggestions and too tired to revise.

Please change that to rewritten.

[patentparanyc]

Originally posted by Penske_Account
It needed ellipses to punch it up a bit....

yeah, to kick it up a notch.